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saturday share


This is the blog where folks who decided

to “Get Lost in the Lines”

come and post their “Collab” Poetry!!!

Earlier in the week, a blog was posted inviting

everyone to come and give “One-More-Line”

to generate lines for this “Collab” Poetry.


This week we generated 152 Lines!


These are the folks who came to give lines this week:

(Click on avatars to visit profiles)


DianeBettieFlossieTonyBarbaraKMarciaSilver LiningMichelleKDeeAngel_Love


This week’s line was:



Hope that you will join in on the fun with collabs and/or comments!

Everyone can participate…you need not to have left any lines.

The lines are located here: Get Lost in the Lines

Pick a few, add a few of your own…and create!

And Please…

leave comment


Love & Light,

Angel

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102 Responses to “Saturday Share, Come One ~ Come All !!!”

  1. GONE FOREVER

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    Marcia Mastroianni
    Marcia Reply:

    My Collaborators♥ BarbaraK♥ Bettie♥ Angel♥

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    Silver Lining
    Silver Reply:

    Marica…..the beauty and heartache in your heart shines…..your writing is wonderful…..I love reading your heart….. :love: :love: :love: :love:

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    Marcia Mastroianni
    Marcia Reply:

    Thank you cherie ♥ It’s easy because he is still so much in my heart ♥

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    Scotorum
    Scotorum Reply:

    So sad but precious to have had such a love Marcia -- :love:

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    Marcia Mastroianni
    Marcia Reply:

    Yes Bob, I was ♥ Thank you ♥

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    Sad yet beautifully penned piece here Marcia … Hugs :love: :love:

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    Marcia Mastroianni
    Marcia Reply:

    Thank you Bettie. I do find it easy to write from my heart ♥

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Awww..sad but wonderfully written, Marcia…feeling your heartache! :( :love: :love: :love:

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    Marcia Mastroianni
    Marcia Reply:

    Good days~bad days ♥ Thank you Angel ♥

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    di710smiles Reply:

    Deep, touching heartfelt beautifully penned as true love within :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

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    Marcia Mastroianni
    Marcia Reply:

    Thank you so much Diane ♥

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    wildfire1 Reply:

    beautiful heart felt write

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    Michelle King
    mrobinking Reply:

    Beautifully sad, Marcia! :love:

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    sunshine2010 Reply:

    Marcia this is wonderful. :love:

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    Barbara Kausteklis
    Barbara_K Reply:

    Feeling every eloquent word in my heart and soul. Honored that you used a line of mine. Precious Collab, Marcia. Giant Hugs to you. :love: :love: :love:

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  2. Tears___ Pictures, Images and Photos

    BLINDED BY TEARS

    ~

    Blinded by the tears I cry
    Will my heart ever let go of the stain
    After all this time and your still gone
    I thought you were my personal don juan

    ~

    Though my heart felt the pain when you walk away I still wanted you to stay
    Emotions so close to the surface and many tears to be shed
    Should you always get paid for what you know
    Why did i purchase that queen size bed

    ~

    I want my dark world cleansed by the rain
    Writtin is a grand place ta start and let it all ride
    Directions to go too many I know
    You cant find what went down the drain

    ~

    Dark and rain is but always my place to hide
    Why so many tears drops fall from these eyes of mine
    I will never begin to know
    The embarrassment makes me want to die

    ~

    All directions lead to sum where I do not know but one I will so take slow
    I will follow though on this know
    Let the rain wash away all tracks of my tears
    And hope to see a better tomorrow that follows

    ~

    Not knowing who to trust with my feelings as an introvert releasing to sky
    Each day people play with the hearts and lies
    Put all lies in a pile then fly
    Careful or youll be a victim bye and bye

    ~

    These tears that I shed do fall on the blind eyes
    Blinded by these tears I can not see why
    As I hang my head in sorrow I did cry for a love I could never fine
    Shed tears in my pillow all night long I did

    ~

    Crying and hurting like a little kid
    I can no longer see the sky
    Yet I still wanna to learn how to fly
    Fly on cloud nine for a true love thats real and make me wanna touch the ski

    ~

    Live tomorrow wit out any sorrows
    Till inner sight reveals the lie
    To all blind eyes these lies will fly
    The way you lie even the blind eye can see

    ~

    Oh but I just love the way you lie
    You but always get a twitch in your eye
    But still rules are here to stay
    Ole rules new rule and none never seem to fade

    ~

    They all still turn out to be a lie every time you say you will stay
    The release of a poem helps this all go away
    Expressing my feelings on a gloomy day
    Misty eyes as I keep asking why

    ~

    All this mishap is makin me shy
    Mourning over my special guy
    Still till this very day and it leaves me to wonder why
    Hiding my feelings so others wont hurt

    ~

    Written By: Bettie Davis ——————-- © September 13 , 2o12

    //

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Wonderfully woven lines with a great video, too! Great write, Bettie! :love: :love: :love:

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    Thank you so much fer enjoyin both Angel .. Hugs :love: :love:

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    di710smiles Reply:

    Awesome write with lines tonight sis..Mourning over my special guy
    Still till this very day and it leaves me to wonder why :groovy: :love: :love: :love: :love:

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    Really appreciate that you enjoyed me write sister gurl makes me happy know … Love ya .. :love: :love:

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    Scotorum
    Scotorum Reply:

    Spectacular (((Bettie)))! The reader really feels along with the protagonist line by line :-D :love:

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    I am very happy that you and the readers are please wit this piece here ta nite Bob .. Gives me much joy in heart ta know .. Thank you much … Hugs Now :mrgreen: :love:

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    Silver Lining
    Silver Reply:

    Bettie….so love this beauty….. :love: :love: :love: :love:

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    Me dear Cherie thank you much for enjoyin .. Love ya .. Hugs :love: :love:

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    wildfire1 Reply:

    awesome :entertained:

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    Thanks much wildfire1 … Hugs Now :love: :love:

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    Marcia Mastroianni
    Marcia Reply:

    WONDERFUL BETTIE ♥

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    Appreciate your enjoyin this Marcia .. Thank you … Hugs

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    Michelle King
    mrobinking Reply:

    Fabulous, Bettie! :love:

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    Thank you very much me sweet Michelle happy you enjoyed this .. Hugs :love: :love:

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    sunshine2010 Reply:

    Very lovely Bettie Picture is beautiful and so is the writing, and thats one of my favorite songs i love Thank You for sharing :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    Appreciate that you have enjoyed the write and video pick here Flossie … Thank you much .. You are welcome .. Hugs :love: :love:

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    Barbara Kausteklis
    Barbara_K Reply:

    Wow! Awesome Collab, Bettie. Wonderful video to accompany too. Big Hugs. :love: :love: :love:

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    Thank you so much girlfriend happy you enjoyed .. Big Hugs back atcha … :love: :love:

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  3. Photobucket
    water drop Pictures, Images and Photos
    ~TEARS~
    Unable to understand why
    Why so many tears drops fall from these eyes of mine
    No one must ever see me this way
    Hiding my feelings so others won’t hurt
    Love is what makes the world go round but every one has give up on tryin
    As I hang my head in sorrow I did cry for a love I could never fine
    Tears on my pillow I cried for you
    I cried a mile a minute the day you walked away
    Though my heart felt the pain when you walk away I still wanted you to stay
    I pretend I’m gonna be ok But on the inside it really hurts
    Hardest time is when we say our goodbyes
    Where ever I go in life I will live for tomorrow
    ~~~~
    Crying is a natural way of letting go of pent up emotions
    I love when it rain then me tears will never see known
    Tears shed in the rain no one knows
    Let the rain wash away all tracks of my tears
    Why so many tears drops fall from these eyes of mine
    Emotions so close to the surface and many tears to be shed
    Let all those tears out and go with life and let thing once again glow
    So wipe those tears away and smile like a pro
    Live tomorrow wit out any sorrows
    Things will be better in coming years
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    TY ALL FOR LOVELY LINES:
    BARB,MARCIA,DIANE,ANGELINO,BETTIE,ANGEL LOVE,MICHELLE,SILVER,DEE,FLOSSIE

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Wonderfully done collab, Flossie! Full of hope! :) :love: :love: :love:

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    Gracefully written piece here Flossie .. Hugs :love: :love:

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    di710smiles Reply:

    Beautiful, touching write with inspiration ..Tears shed in the rain no one knows…Live tomorrow wit out any sorrows
    Things will be better in coming years :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

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    Scotorum
    Scotorum Reply:

    A sad tale and good advice Flossie! :-D :love:

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    Silver Lining
    Silver Reply:

    Beautiful Flossie…… :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

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    wildfire1 Reply:

    beautiful write

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    Marcia Mastroianni
    Marcia Reply:

    TERRIFIC WRITE FLOSSIE ♥

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    Michelle King
    mrobinking Reply:

    Beautiful Flossie! :love:

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    sunshine2010 Reply:

    You guys are amazing i want to Thank You so much this is very touching. you guys are amazing friends. :love: :love: :love: :love:

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    Barbara Kausteklis
    Barbara_K Reply:

    Such beautiful release and eloquent Collab, Flossie. Thanks for incorporating a line of mine. Big Hugs. :love: :love: :love:

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  4. Sorry to be so late, but my life is in a bit of an upheaval at the moment…i may not be around too much for the next while, but will try as i can. Love to all! :love: :love: :love:

    ~

    Photobucket

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    A CPC Collab with pals: Diane, Bettie and Silver Lining

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    di710smiles Reply:

    WoW From the heart ..Emotions feeling as reading Heartfelt, touching, sincere write Bless your heart Love*Prayers :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Thanks so much, Diane…truly grateful for your love and prayers! :love: :love: :love:

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    Awesomeness be this piece emotions and heartfelt true .. Hugs :love: :love:

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Thanks so much, Bettie…facing some uncertainty and trying times! :( :love: :love: :love:

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    Scotorum
    Scotorum Reply:

    Highly timely in a very personal way yet broadly instructive Angel! Well done! :-D :love:

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Yes…and i did this a few weeks ago, not knowing what was coming my way. Thanks so much, Bob! :love: :love: :love:

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    wildfire1 Reply:

    love this

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Thank you, Wildfire! :love: :love: :love:

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    Marcia Mastroianni
    Marcia Reply:

    SUCH A HEART FELT WRITE ♥

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Thank you, Marcia! :love: :love: :love:

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    Michelle King
    mrobinking Reply:

    Heartfelt indeed, love this! :love:

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Trying times ahead and trying to remain strong! Thanks so much, Michelle! :love: :love: :love:

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    sunshine2010 Reply:

    Angel such beauty in writing and picture. TY for lovely PNP :love: :love: :love: :love:

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Thank you, Flossie…happy you enjoyed! :) :love: :love: :love:

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    Barbara Kausteklis
    Barbara_K Reply:

    Giant Hugs to you. Eloquent and exquisite Collab, Angel Love. :love: :love: :love:

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Thanks so much, Barbara! Hugs back atcha! :love: :love: :love:

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  5. Lady-blue

    I Still Remember It`s Okay

    Blinded By The Tears I Cry as I cried
    Tears shed in the rain no one knows
    I wanted my dark world cleansed by the rain
    Where you nor anyone could find what went down the drain
    Releasing all my pain
    Will my heart ever let go of the stain
    You can never let go of someone who dies
    I still remember the day
    Misty eyes as I keep asking why
    Beside myself not knowing feelings I dread
    It would had been nice to be smilin instead
    Emotions so close to the surface and many tears to be shed
    I could not see the sky
    Yet I still wanted to learn how to fly
    Needing to let all those tears out and go with life and let thing once again glow
    With ones gone within know giving me wings to unfold
    Its time to let sum good joys flow as I learned to look at all in a positive flow
    Let writing keep me sane as I gain and grow
    Emotions expressed through writing sometimes eases the pain
    I do want to feel alive and stay here to live my life to the fullest
    Tears of joy it1s okay
    Take my hand as one let`s pray
    Knowing our love ones are within to guide us in every way
    To live to fly even higher than we can imagine with their love within every day

    Angel Love, Bettie, Michelle K.,Tony, Marcia,Scotorum,
    Silver Lining, Flossie, Barbara K., Dee

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Beautiful, Diane…guided by our loved ones always! :love: :love: :love: :love:

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    Scotorum
    Scotorum Reply:

    A valuable cathartic composition Diane -- and thanks for including a line of mine :-D :love:

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    Wow … This is just so beautiful the dark side of love be yet we remember .. Heartfelt and sad be this piece sister gurl … Hugs :love: :love:

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    wildfire1 Reply:

    awesome write

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    Marcia Mastroianni
    Marcia Reply:

    BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN DIANE ♥

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    Michelle King
    mrobinking Reply:

    Very beautiful Diane! :love:

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    sunshine2010 Reply:

    Diane TY for wonderful write and picture you have to go with it. You truely a awesome Friend and sis.

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  6. Yup Photobucket is STH tonight. Found the perfect pic for this and tried every which way to load it into P-Bucket, to no avail. But here’s an older one I had already stored and used once in a PnP.

    Photobucket

    LADY LOVER’S LAMENT

    Blinded by the tears I cry,
    never really knowing why.
    Expressions on a gloomy day
    helps enlighten a new way..

    Misty eyed as I ask why
    Mourning with my special guy.
    The one who helped me fly so high
    who got me wet when I was dry.

    Crying like a little kid,
    concerned that I might flip my lid,
    till I no longer see the sky.
    Yet I still long to learn to fly!

    Hope gets dim and starts to die.
    I feel my future fly off high,
    above the clouds up in the sky,
    till inner sight reveals the lie.

    Routine has got me in its grasp,
    held fast by circumstances’ clasp.
    Though dreams of us fill every day,
    encumbrance halts a break away..

    So we live on day by day,
    dragging our four feet of clay,
    stuck among familial brambles,
    neither ready for the shambles.

    Alhough we savor the same goal;
    Moving on would rip a hole.
    Could love fulfilled ever fill it?
    Or would guilt cripple and kill it?

    Though uncertainty restrains us,
    Still the dreaming well sustains us.
    A precious tie which binds us tight
    till someday comes a new daylight,.

    Copyright September 14th 2012 RGD

    The lovers who dreamed up a line: Angel Love, Bettie, Michelle (5), Tony.

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Awesome collab, Bob…great pic, too. I think what you have to do to get things working in PB is switch to the new one…i had to get things uploaded…wouldn’t upload with the old view. And I am not so fond of the new one, but suppose better get used to it! :roll: :love: :love:

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    Scotorum
    Scotorum Reply:

    Oh thanks that explains why my new laptop has a different Photobucket cover page

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    di710smiles Reply:

    WOW Love this Awesome PnP..Neat graphic :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

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    Scotorum
    Scotorum Reply:

    Thanks Diane, it dragged on a bit but finally I found a good ending stanza for it. :-D :love:

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    Bettie Davis
    Bettie Reply:

    Excellent just love to where you went wit these lines here ta nite Bob .. All kin say is awesomeness .. Yeah .. Hugs Now :love: :love:

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    wildfire1 Reply:

    sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet write

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    Scotorum
    Scotorum Reply:

    the lines can truly inspire Thanks (((Bettie))) :-D :love:

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    Marcia Mastroianni
    Marcia Reply:

    YOUR THE BEST BOB ♥

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    Scotorum
    Scotorum Reply:

    You’re no poetic slouch yourself Marcia! :-D :love:

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    Michelle King
    mrobinking Reply:

    (((Bob))) this is fabulous and thanks for using several of my lines! :love:

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    Scotorum
    Scotorum Reply:

    You really contributed a lot of lines this week (((Michelle))) and some helped move this piece to where it went! :-D :love:

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    sunshine2010 Reply:

    Bob This is a fantastic write, I love the picture. TY for sharing with us tonigght :love: :love: :love:

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    Scotorum
    Scotorum Reply:

    TY Flossie I put a different one on it when I posted it on my blog. :-D :love:

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    Barbara Kausteklis
    Barbara_K Reply:

    Eloquent and gorgeous Collab, Scotorum. Feeling every eloquent words. Photobucket was most definitely not working well over this weekend. Glitchy with their new format too. :love: :love: :love:

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  7. Blinded by the tears I cry,
    Sitting here asking my self why.
    Listening to my inner voice lie.
    Its not going to be alright.

    Thoughts tangled and twined up in a rollercoaster ride.
    Days go by sadly in time.
    It seems like nothing again well ever be fine.
    Its so dark here in my mind.

    Yesterday I cried and cried till a smile finally came upon my face.
    I knew then the tears had found the right place.
    I stood up and paced .
    I was lost in this horrible place.

    In this day I felt my heart stop beating.
    I knew I was being defeated .
    I couldn’t bring my self back down to seating.
    Only thing I could do was yell out this dam city.

    All at once I saw my angel crying.
    My soul was blackening and I was dying.
    My world once again was cruel and lying.
    And I was left here tormented and crying.

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    Michelle King
    mrobinking Reply:

    Very sad and beautifully written! :love:

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    sunshine2010 Reply:

    Very well wrote Wildfire. :-D :love: :-D

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Awww….wonderful, albeit sad, write, Wildfire! Big hugs! :love: :love: :love:

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    Scotorum
    Scotorum Reply:

    Energetic monorhyming with some great lines in this sad tale of a gloomy state of affairs wild

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    di710smiles Reply:

    WoW Heartfelt , deep write :love: :love: :love: :love: In this day I felt my heart stop beating.
    I knew I was being defeated ~ Scary feeling

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    Barbara Kausteklis
    Barbara_K Reply:

    Feeling every eloquent word. Big Hugs to you, Crystal. :love: :love: :love:

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  8. All fabulous collabs and happy weekend everyone! <3

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    Angel Love
    Angel Love Reply:

    Thanks for stopping by, Michelle! Happy weekend to you…hope you are getting some R&R! :) :love: :love: :love:

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    di710smiles Reply:

    Good Evening..Good Night Peaceful Dreams..Enjoy a Blessed Sunday :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

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    Barbara Kausteklis
    Barbara_K Reply:

    Happy Weekend to you too, Michelle. Wishing you a wonderful week ahead. :love: :love: :love:

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  9. FLOWING

    by Barbara K

    A CPC Collab

    Tears flowing from my eyes
    and streaming down my face,
    emotions bottled up inside
    and I haven’t the vaguest
    reason how or why
    except they’re so easy to see,
    worn directly on my sleeve,
    how I’m feeling at the moment
    even if there’s a smile
    worn upon my face.

    Waves of emotion washing
    over my heart and soul,
    tears spilling over
    releasing sadness
    as well as joy.
    And at the end of a day
    I gather them up again,
    holding them close
    and embracing each one,
    even the sadness of yesterday
    when I was blinded
    by the tears I cried.
    And I move forward
    with the break of dawn
    and a new day,
    one foot in front
    of the other
    and determined
    to carry on.

    (c) barbara kausteklis 9-15-12

    Thanks to Angel Love and Bettie
    for their lines woven in with my own.

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  10. A new day, one foot in front of the other, determined to carry on…can’t be any other way. Wonderful write, Barbara! :love: :love: :love:

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    Barbara Kausteklis
    Barbara_K Reply:

    Thanks so much, Angel Love! And for your inspiring theme and lines. :love: :love: :love:

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  11. Much love and gratitude to all who came out this week to participate in the collab process. I have a family medical crisis that I am dealing with and may not be around for the collabs for a bit, but will try as I can. They will still be posted and Bob will be filling in as needed. Big hugs! :love: :love: :love:

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    Barbara Kausteklis
    Barbara_K Reply:

    You and your family will be in my thoughts and prayers. Giant Hugs to you. :love: :love: :love:

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