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Friday Fling #228 for April 19th 2013


A famous historian once equated civilization with cities.

Urbanization was said to provide more opportunities for social communication of ideas of all sorts,

which led to innovations, organizations, rules, order and higher culture.


This may be a controversial notion.

Given the occurrence of various evils in cities such as violence,

it might even be an oxymoron to use the term “civilized city.”


Our topic this week is to write about a city, real or imagined,

and/or anything about it, from your actual personal experiences,

to what you think you know or can imagine about cities.

An added challenge is to use at least one oxymoron.

An oxymoron is a two word phrase in which the two words have opposite meanings and when combined,

create a new meaning.

Here is an example of one that Michelle wrote awhile ago.

A Lonely Soul

She was homeless and all alone 
Her lunch was half eaten cold toast 
Quickly stopping her hunger moan 
She was homeless and all alone 
A living dead life was her zone 
The silent screams she feared the most 
She was homeless and all alone 
Her lunch was half eaten cold toast

Michelle Marko King 
09-10-12


Michelle included an oxymoron in every line above.

The oxymorons were:

all alone 
cold toast 
quickly stopping 
living dead 
silent screams

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Here is a list of ten possibilities which you could use in your urban poem:

1. Jumbo shrimp 
2. Guest host 
3. Mutually exclusive 
4. First-strike defense 
5. Upscale downtown
6. Pretty ugly 
7. A little big 
8. Old fad 
9. Smart bomb  
10. Good grief


This week the Friday Fling considers how civilized urban life is,

and tries to communicate it with an oxymoron!

Be sure to save time to read and comment unmoronically on your fellow Pals’ observations.

Then go enjoy an urbane weekend!

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Fickle Finger of Fate Award for  April 12th



Congratulations Angel Love!

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60 Comments

  • Scotorum says:

    Welcome everyone to the Friday Fling’s trip downtown! Pull up an oxymoron and see where in the city your muse finds a poetic urban legend!

  • Scotorum says:

    I used the five oxymorons Michelle had used in her poem, in the order she had used them, let them take my muse into grisly pop culture, and added a couple more just for fun LOL

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  • Bettie says:

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    Okay .. Here goes me attempt at this Oxymorons Form .. Know aint even half right but maybe vibe wit give it at lease a fiver for try .. Giggles ..
    ~

    THE VISIT

    (*^_^*)

    I went to visit this friend in oz
    They set up this big seafood Jumbo shrimp salad dish
    In this Upscale downtown place they where
    The Guest host waz
    Pretty ugly to my sight
    Old fad
    My first hint waz good grief
    And my very
    First strike defense
    Not ta be
    An old fad
    Be smart not bomb
    But theshrimps were a little big
    Yet the place waz mutually exclusive

    (*^_^*)

    Friend enemy
    Jumbo shrimp
    Love war
    Upscale downtown
    Good bad
    Guest host
    Tall short
    Pretty ugly
    Fat slim
    Old fad
    Bright dark
    In out
    Over under

    Written By: Bettie Davis —————————— © April 18 , 2o13

  • di710smiles says:

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    Downtown Lousivlle
    We used to go downtown to shop
    Then, time changed with malls conveniet to home
    All dressed up during the past
    Now they were jeans, shots even show own flash
    Not like the past it did not last
    They rebuild downtown fast
    Those who shop now some dress with class
    Today we have malls for all
    Those still show all
    I can remember the days when minie skirts were short worn
    Ladies were pretty with legs shown
    Ladies were pretty ugly when more was shown
    As one day going to work I witnessed
    One walking along sidewalk glass flew warned
    For 3 cars collided into each other as they viewed
    Was pretty ugly as they picked a fight
    Even was on the news late that night
    We used to go downtown to shop
    Now many work downtown and shop, too
    Protected by police in malls and downtown as it grew
    All inviting with trees, seating along side of streets, night clubs and restaurants new

  • Scotorum says:

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    OCKSIE MORON’S DREAM

    The city is exceptionally mundane
    in Ocksie Moron’s dream.
    There lonely crowds honestly feign
    the same differences seen.

    A scattered pile of happenstance,
    Infinite intimate strangers.
    Sophisticated ignorance
    in minefield of secure dangers.

    Each acutely oblivious
    to quiet cries for help.
    Belabor secrets obvious
    like hyperactive kelp.

    To each his untouched intercourse
    From each her fair injustice,
    inflicting voluntary force;
    interminable solstice.

    Hid in plain sight, small greatness looms
    among each soul’s parched spring,
    for from its muses’ birthing tombs
    mute songs from hearts may sing.

    Though daylight nightmares’ divinity
    may shape lonely cityscapes,
    No limited infinity
    prevents prisoners’ escapes.

    For even mindless thoughts may bring
    unconscious revelations,
    of how to walk on ceilings,
    follow leading inspirations.

    Copyright April 18th 2013 RGD

  • Ted says:

    This is not a wonderful way to return to the CPC, perhaps the grimmest piece I’ve ever put to paper. With apologies in advance, I hope to return soon with a brighter outlook. My prayers for peace and strength to any of you affected by the torrent of terrible events we’ve witnessed these past several months.

    Urbania (Insania)

    underground the urban sprawl
    a concrete eden sprouts from fiery ashes
    forged from melted scraps of twisted crashes
    where reckless traffic met a precipitous crawl
    while moms found bargains at the mall

    tattered jeans are grown out of fashion
    so take a hike with your backpack
    it’s a tangled jungle out there Jack
    hack past the clearly confused masses
    to dredge up some disastrous compassion

    this ain’t no place to raise a daughter
    in every tree slinks wary peril
    meting partial justice from a smoking barrel
    and the barren arms of a thoughtless plotter
    tote another lamb to useless slaughter

    © Ted Meredith, April 2013

  • mrobinking says:

    Hello (((Bob))) and everyone… Pizza’s here now and I will be right back to read everyone… Happy Friday to all! :love:

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